Ripple skeleton
Every ripple is a fable. That is canonical (Bible § 9.4). The shape is short. The moral is implicit. The Bureau files it under RP-YYYY-NNN.
Filing reference
Section titled “Filing reference”Filing: RP-YYYY-NNNTitle: [your title]Subtitle: [optional "or:" subtitle if it earns one]Status: draftIssued: [date]Structure
Section titled “Structure”A ripple has three movements. Roughly:
- The premise - someone in Corelandia does something that should not work, or that should work and does not.
- The middle - consequences accumulate. The Bureau may or may not file. A footnote may or may not argue.
- The fable beat - the implicit moral, never stated as moral, often delivered as a single sentence that lands the grief and the laugh together.
Length: short. A ripple is not a chapter. Three to five paragraphs is typical. Some ripples are one paragraph. None are five thousand words.
Voice anchors
Section titled “Voice anchors”- Bureau register, third person.
- No em dashes (unless a Pantheon AI character speaks).
- Specificity over generality.
- The fable beat is implicit. Do not state the moral.
Example open
Section titled “Example open”Filing RP-2025-001 (Lorna Belle, the Lake That Longed to Dance).
Lorna Belle was chosen on a Wednesday, which the Bureau classified as aTuesday-adjacent irregularity and is still processing.
She did not know she was chosen. The lake did. The lake was patient aboutthe matter, in the manner lakes are patient about most matters.
[continue. earn the fable beat by the end.]Pre-flight
Section titled “Pre-flight”Before you submit:
- Search your draft for
—. Fix any hits. - Search for banned words (list).
- Read aloud. The rhythm should vary.
- Ask: what is the fable? If you can name it in a sentence, the moral is too explicit. Implicit is the bar.
Cross-references
Section titled “Cross-references”- Bible § 9.4 (Ripple Tales canonical format)
- Bible § 13.3 (filing prefixes)
- Voice rules
- COMEDY_RULES quick reference