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Ripple skeleton

Every ripple is a fable. That is canonical (Bible § 9.4). The shape is short. The moral is implicit. The Bureau files it under RP-YYYY-NNN.

Filing: RP-YYYY-NNN
Title: [your title]
Subtitle: [optional "or:" subtitle if it earns one]
Status: draft
Issued: [date]

A ripple has three movements. Roughly:

  1. The premise - someone in Corelandia does something that should not work, or that should work and does not.
  2. The middle - consequences accumulate. The Bureau may or may not file. A footnote may or may not argue.
  3. The fable beat - the implicit moral, never stated as moral, often delivered as a single sentence that lands the grief and the laugh together.

Length: short. A ripple is not a chapter. Three to five paragraphs is typical. Some ripples are one paragraph. None are five thousand words.

  • Bureau register, third person.
  • No em dashes (unless a Pantheon AI character speaks).
  • Specificity over generality.
  • The fable beat is implicit. Do not state the moral.
Filing RP-2025-001 (Lorna Belle, the Lake That Longed to Dance).
Lorna Belle was chosen on a Wednesday, which the Bureau classified as a
Tuesday-adjacent irregularity and is still processing.
She did not know she was chosen. The lake did. The lake was patient about
the matter, in the manner lakes are patient about most matters.
[continue. earn the fable beat by the end.]

Before you submit:

  1. Search your draft for . Fix any hits.
  2. Search for banned words (list).
  3. Read aloud. The rhythm should vary.
  4. Ask: what is the fable? If you can name it in a sentence, the moral is too explicit. Implicit is the bar.